viernes, 2 de octubre de 2015

Describing my friend

I´m going to introduce my best friend.
I´ve known Sarah since 12 years.
She is of a medium hight, so, she measures around 1 meter and 60 centimeters. She has long straight brown hair, big blue eyes, pointed nose, long eyelashes, thick eyebrows, some freckles and spots.
She is really fashionable, so, she loves going to the latest fashion.
From my point of view she is cheerful, charmy, reliable, so, you can trust on her, hard-working, responsible, outgoing, talkative, so , she talks with everyone and honest, she always says me the truth.
However she is a bit bossy. Three years ago we had an argument, because she ordered me to do a thing that i didn´t want. Fortunately, she apologizes me. Finally, despite this argument we have been best friends and i hope to continue being the best friends for a long time.



 Peer response for Laura Gómez Cutillas
 By: Ana Haro Hernández
 I like your topic because friendship is very important to me, but i don´t understand some parts  because of your form to explain. I think you can improve it and make this paragraph stronger.

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