SPACE DEBRIS

I. Today, the amount of space Debris falling to earth is growing. Many of them have produced changes on the earth. They can cause problems and also, the can damage our country. There are many of them in which we know the sites they come from. However, there are others that we don´t know where they have dropped as in the case of the black ball that fell last week in our region, which its origin is unknown.
II. Effects of the Space Debris:
A. They can be a catastrophic explotions
B. They can pollute our country
C. They can damage our country
D. They can be dangerously radioactive.
III. Places where they can proceed:
A. Heaven
B. Rocket
C. Satellites
D. Moon
IV. Countries where many of these objects have been found: 
A. Australia
B. Brasil
C. Spain
V. The space Debris can produce a lot of effects in the world. Somerimes, it is very difficult to guess where they come from.

Peer response for Laura Gómez Cutillas.
By: Adriana Jerez
Dear Laura! As we have been taught, an introduction should have a lenght between 5 and 10 lines. You have written 7 lines, therefore, the extension is adequate. On the one hand, you have written a clear thesis statement; this sentence introduce very well the main idea of the whole text and every point you are going to talk about. To sum up, the conclusion also says the main idea and ends up with a wider sentence.

Outline

Hobbies

I. Introduction: Having the opportunity to make your hobbies is one of the best things in life because; What better to live life doing what you really love like listening to music, shopping, skating, diving, dancing or doing sport?
II.Music
A. The style of music I listen to:
1 Pop
2. Soul Music
3. R ​​& B
4. Country Music
B. My favorite singers:
1. Bruno Mars
2. Ariana Grande
3. Ed Sheeran
4. Adele
5. Demi Lovato
6. Michael Jackson
7. Taylor Swift
C. The concerts I have been:
1. David Bisbal in Murcia
2. The ear vangoth in Alicante
3. Justin Bieber in Barcelona
4. Malu in Madrid
III. Activities that I usually do:
A. Shopping
1. I go shopping with my mother or my friends
2. I take sales or offers to buy clothes
3.  I buy everything in a different store
B. skating
1. In winter i usually go to ice skating rinks like Murcia or Alicante
2. In summer I like to skate along the promenade to the beach
C. Diving
1. I love diving in the rocks and see fishes
2. Every summer I dive with my father
3. I like wearing flippers and diving at great depths
D. Dancing:
1. I was going to ballet from 3 to 13 years
2. I have been dancing in the Christmas floats and also in the auditorium of my village
3. Now I've signed up to a dance academy
IV. The sport
A. The sport helps me to disconnect
1. When I do sport my mind rests after being a whole day studying
2. It helps me forget to forget about my diary grind
B. I get in shape
1. I am quicker
2. I am stronger
3. I feel better with my body

V. Thanks to all these hobbies my life is better because I enjoy doing them and i do what i really like. Each person has a different taste and everyone must carry out the most of them since they bring us happiness.

You don´t need to smoke or to drink to have a good time.

 Today it´s rare to see modern teenagers that don´t smoke or drink. Most people who try the snuff or drink for the first time only say that they will do it in a single occasion, but then it creates addition and is very difficult to leave, especially snuff. Many people start smoking or drinking when they go to a party with his or her friends, since they feel different or rare because others are smoking or drinking and here is when they start drinking. I think this is true because when I go to a party I might feel different from others because they are drinking and I didn´t.  However, I think it depends on your personality because when you go to a party you don´t need to drink or smoke to have fun, so, when I go to a Party I only took a drink or I take a bottle of water.

I've never drank or smoked and probably many people call me a weird but I'd rather be a rare before being embarrassed and not lead a healthy life. For these people when they reach a certain age, they begin to have health problems and they can´t do nothing. A part of it when I go to a party I realize that alcohol affects one´s mood; you becomes happier, do crazy things and the next day you don´t remember anything. Moreover, these follies may involve many problems, because if you're drunk, people can fool you and tell you to do something or can take advantage of you and then the next day they can upload photos or videos to social networks and you regret what you've done but because you can´t do anything. I think it´s not necessary to drink or smoke at parties to make friends, then I believe these people who smoke and drink should avoid it. You can have a good time with your friends playing sports, watching movies, going to a concert of a singer you like, going to malls, going to an amusement park or to travel, therefore you don´t need to go to a party and drink or smoke to amuse you.

Advantages and disadvantages of private and state school.

Many people think that it´s better for their children to go to a private school than to a state school, but, is this true?

I think both of them have their advantages and disadvantages.

On the one hand both teachings have some advantages:

The first advantage of private education is that there is usually good conditions and materials in it, so that students can study and work well. For instance, they have computers, whiteboards, air conditioning, etc.Second, private education can be accessed with fewer requirements than public education. Third, in the private school students have better preparation because the rules are stricten and more students apply for it. 

The first advantage of public education is that students can dress freely and they don´t have to wear uniforms. Second, in public education the access to go to universities in the country is easier.

On the other hand. both teachings have some disadvantages:

The first disadvantage of private education is that places to access it are more limited. Second, in private education not all parents can affrod to send their children to it due to the costs. Third, in the private school students can´t enjoy certain subsidies or aids that public eduaction receives from the state.

The first disadvantage os public education is that infraestructures and conditions are worst than private education. The second disadvantage of public education is that the control and surveillance that teachers have towards students is lower and this makes many of them try to cheat during the exams risking that the teachers sees them, takes the exam and stop the test. Third, many students don´t have much interest in tells them to possing the grade because it´s free.

In conclusion, i think if you´re lucky that your parents can afford to pay for your studies, the best option is going to a private school and enjoying certain advantages that aren´t in the state school.

Ending a story...

It´s a story of a man who lived in the same building with his wife. Everything was going great until one day unfortunately the men was fired from his job and he broke with his wife. Everything was going worse and worse and he took the light decision to commit suicide. But, was he finally suicided?

The man climbed to the top of a building and then, he went out the window and he thought about commit suicide being there because he believed that this was the best way to get rid of their problems. However, suddenly appeared an angel from the sky which teach him a magic ball with good things that would happen to him if he doesn´t commit suicide, so, the angel convinced him not to commit suicide since he probably later would regrets about it  and it wouldn´t have solution. Moreover, he was too young and he could live like a normal man, looking for a job until find it and he might reconcile with his wife or he probably meet a woman with his same interests.

Problem and Solution Paragraph

Poverty Around The world:
Problem by: Laura Gómez
Nowadays, there are a lot of countries of high poverty such as Haiti or Zimbabwe. Also, there are many countries with extreme poverty. Most of these countries are in Africa.
In the world there are a lot of people that can´t cover their basic needs since they don´t have food to eat, potable water to drink or to bathe, a school to go and to learn a education or a house where they can live.  It´s a huge problem because there are many people who die due to these facts. We don´t realize that these people are suffering so much and we also don´t appreciate what we have.

Solution by: Laura García
We have to resolve this problem. We should let to steal their petrol and explot people of these countries. Maybe, we should give them some money to build real business. Thus, people could have a real job and money to develope themselves.

What i do when i fell down?

There are days that i fell down because someone has lied me, dessapointed me or because i haven´t achieve what i wanted.

First of all, when I fell down I try to forget what makes me feel bad doing things i love like going to the gym, listening to music, singing or songwriting.

Secondly, i try to talk to my friends and tell them what happens to me, because they always give me good advices and they try to tell me what i should do or what not. Furthermore, they always help me at all when I'm depressed and they try to cheer me up. For example, last year I failed an exam of the language school. I had never failed an exam,so, when the teacher told me that i had failed it, i didn´t believe it. I talked to my friends and they gave me encouragement and they told me not to give up because I could pass that test. Thanks to my effort and my friends I could pass the exam.

Thirdly, I try to give less importance to things not thinking much about them. This is very difficult for me, but I try. One year I was disappointed with my friend because I found out that she was criticizing me and she was taking advantage of me,so, she just wanted me to ask duties.Also, one day I went out with her and her friends and I stopped ago side because I didn´t expect it and it hurt a lot. I went home crying but then I realized that she wasn´t my friend and that I shouldn´t rely so much on people because then you disillusioned, depressed and you pass badly. With all this and more things that have happened to me, I have learned to be stronger and not rely so much on the people. Moreover, i have realized that not everyone is like me and i can´t always receive what I give.

This way I can reach the conclusion that we shouldn´t be depressed by something or someone, but more trust in yourself, encourage, be positive and not give much importance to things.