SPACE DEBRIS

I. Today, the amount of space Debris falling to earth is growing. Many of them have produced changes on the earth. They can cause problems and also, the can damage our country. There are many of them in which we know the sites they come from. However, there are others that we don´t know where they have dropped as in the case of the black ball that fell last week in our region, which its origin is unknown.
II. Effects of the Space Debris:
A. They can be a catastrophic explotions
B. They can pollute our country
C. They can damage our country
D. They can be dangerously radioactive.
III. Places where they can proceed:
A. Heaven
B. Rocket
C. Satellites
D. Moon
IV. Countries where many of these objects have been found: 
A. Australia
B. Brasil
C. Spain
V. The space Debris can produce a lot of effects in the world. Somerimes, it is very difficult to guess where they come from.

Peer response for Laura Gómez Cutillas.
By: Adriana Jerez
Dear Laura! As we have been taught, an introduction should have a lenght between 5 and 10 lines. You have written 7 lines, therefore, the extension is adequate. On the one hand, you have written a clear thesis statement; this sentence introduce very well the main idea of the whole text and every point you are going to talk about. To sum up, the conclusion also says the main idea and ends up with a wider sentence.