Advantages and disadvantages of private and state school.

Many people think that it´s better for their children to go to a private school than to a state school, but, is this true?

I think both of them have their advantages and disadvantages.

On the one hand both teachings have some advantages:

The first advantage of private education is that there is usually good conditions and materials in it, so that students can study and work well. For instance, they have computers, whiteboards, air conditioning, etc.Second, private education can be accessed with fewer requirements than public education. Third, in the private school students have better preparation because the rules are stricten and more students apply for it. 

The first advantage of public education is that students can dress freely and they don´t have to wear uniforms. Second, in public education the access to go to universities in the country is easier.

On the other hand. both teachings have some disadvantages:

The first disadvantage of private education is that places to access it are more limited. Second, in private education not all parents can affrod to send their children to it due to the costs. Third, in the private school students can´t enjoy certain subsidies or aids that public eduaction receives from the state.

The first disadvantage os public education is that infraestructures and conditions are worst than private education. The second disadvantage of public education is that the control and surveillance that teachers have towards students is lower and this makes many of them try to cheat during the exams risking that the teachers sees them, takes the exam and stop the test. Third, many students don´t have much interest in tells them to possing the grade because it´s free.

In conclusion, i think if you´re lucky that your parents can afford to pay for your studies, the best option is going to a private school and enjoying certain advantages that aren´t in the state school.

Ending a story...

It´s a story of a man who lived in the same building with his wife. Everything was going great until one day unfortunately the men was fired from his job and he broke with his wife. Everything was going worse and worse and he took the light decision to commit suicide. But, was he finally suicided?

The man climbed to the top of a building and then, he went out the window and he thought about commit suicide being there because he believed that this was the best way to get rid of their problems. However, suddenly appeared an angel from the sky which teach him a magic ball with good things that would happen to him if he doesn´t commit suicide, so, the angel convinced him not to commit suicide since he probably later would regrets about it  and it wouldn´t have solution. Moreover, he was too young and he could live like a normal man, looking for a job until find it and he might reconcile with his wife or he probably meet a woman with his same interests.

Problem and Solution Paragraph

Poverty Around The world:
Problem by: Laura Gómez
Nowadays, there are a lot of countries of high poverty such as Haiti or Zimbabwe. Also, there are many countries with extreme poverty. Most of these countries are in Africa.
In the world there are a lot of people that can´t cover their basic needs since they don´t have food to eat, potable water to drink or to bathe, a school to go and to learn a education or a house where they can live.  It´s a huge problem because there are many people who die due to these facts. We don´t realize that these people are suffering so much and we also don´t appreciate what we have.

Solution by: Laura García
We have to resolve this problem. We should let to steal their petrol and explot people of these countries. Maybe, we should give them some money to build real business. Thus, people could have a real job and money to develope themselves.

What i do when i fell down?

There are days that i fell down because someone has lied me, dessapointed me or because i haven´t achieve what i wanted.

First of all, when I fell down I try to forget what makes me feel bad doing things i love like going to the gym, listening to music, singing or songwriting.

Secondly, i try to talk to my friends and tell them what happens to me, because they always give me good advices and they try to tell me what i should do or what not. Furthermore, they always help me at all when I'm depressed and they try to cheer me up. For example, last year I failed an exam of the language school. I had never failed an exam,so, when the teacher told me that i had failed it, i didn´t believe it. I talked to my friends and they gave me encouragement and they told me not to give up because I could pass that test. Thanks to my effort and my friends I could pass the exam.

Thirdly, I try to give less importance to things not thinking much about them. This is very difficult for me, but I try. One year I was disappointed with my friend because I found out that she was criticizing me and she was taking advantage of me,so, she just wanted me to ask duties.Also, one day I went out with her and her friends and I stopped ago side because I didn´t expect it and it hurt a lot. I went home crying but then I realized that she wasn´t my friend and that I shouldn´t rely so much on people because then you disillusioned, depressed and you pass badly. With all this and more things that have happened to me, I have learned to be stronger and not rely so much on the people. Moreover, i have realized that not everyone is like me and i can´t always receive what I give.

This way I can reach the conclusion that we shouldn´t be depressed by something or someone, but more trust in yourself, encourage, be positive and not give much importance to things.

Comparative/Contrasting paragraph

Both Johnny Rotten ans Rostropovich have been very important musicians in his generation. However, Johnny Rotten music is different from Rostropovich music.
On the one hand Johnny Rotten is the lead singer of Sex Pistols. He is a britain musician of punk and rock music. He moves a lot on stage, so, in the image he is singing and dancing at  the same time. Most people listen this kind of music in nightclubs or they go to concerts to listen. Moreover the type of people who listen this type of music are young people.
On the other hand Rostropovich was a Soviet and Russian musician of Classical music. He didn´t move on stage but he sat on a chair. He played the cello, so, he was the greatest chellist of his generation. Most people listen this kind of music in the theatres. Also, the type of people that listend this music are elderly people or people who want to relax.
To sum up these singers play different styles of music but both have excelled in music history.

An animal is like a person

Today there are many people that shouldn´t have an animal. I say this because many people beat their animals or they throw them from home because they dont want.These people have no heart.
On the one hand you don´t need to hit an animal to teach it because if you want to teach an animal you can do it in several ways, for example, if you want your animal to do its needs away from home you can get it out of the park or the street and once it has done its needs outside you must reward or stroke him indicating that he has done its needs in the right place or if the dog has done something wrong like biting a chair, you can shout a simple `No´ in strong tone of voice and it will understand that what he has done is incorrect and it don´t do it again.
Moreover those people who throw away their dogs cause they don´t want or they are tired of them is because they don´t love them and they don´t realize that an animal is like a person. For example, when you scold them, they lower their heads or when you caress them or you give them cuddles, they move their tails. I mean that they have also feelings, so, when people leave, they don´t know where to go, they feel desoriented and if they don´t find food to eat they die. The same would happen to a person if someone abandons her.
To conclude, I think we should get more in place of animals and if we really don´t want them in our homes because we don´t like them, we are allergic or we think they give a lot of work, we don´t have to accept them, but once welcomed we must teach, care and meet certain obligations as feed them or take them out to the street. I'm sure that if dogs talk, they would thank to those people who care for them and really love them.

My favorite singer

Hi! I´ll tell you a little about my favorite singer.
My favorite singer of pop music is Justin Bieber.
He was born in Canada on March 1, 1994. He is an actor, a singer and canadian composer.
In 2008 Scooter Braun discovered Bieber when he accidentally saw him singing in some videos from youtube and later he began to be his manager. Braun gathered the singer with Usher and he signed a musical contract. In 2009 Justin published his first album ´one time´. His song´baby´became the most watched music video in youtube with over 300 million of reproductions.
The singer has been awarded and nominated many times since he won the artsit of a year at the American Music Awards in 2010 and was nominated at the 53rd Grammy Awards. Since then Justin has made many albums and tours.

Two years ago he came to Spain and I asked my father to take me to see him. I knew it was almost impossible that happened because the tickets were very expensive. However, one day I got home and i found the tickets on the table. I didn´t believe it. At that time i began to mourn the emotion because finally i was able to see my idol and fulfill one of my biggest dreams, and then it was. As this was my birthday present. I went with my father to Barcelona and i could enjoy the unique experience of seeing Justin Bieber in concert, it was impressive.
On the one hand i love Justin Bieber for their dances. But above all, i love his music, their songs and the meaning of these.
I absolutely love all his songs, but the ones i like As long as you love me, Mistletoe, All around the world, where are u now and believe.
On the other hand he has been accused several times and he has had several problems. For instance, last year he was arrested in Miami for driving with a license that expired 6 months ago and for throwing eggs at his neighbor´s house. For this and many reasons he has been critized.
Nevertheless Justin is still my idol and although sometimes people laught at me because i like Justin Bieber, i will continue listening to his music as usual. Well, i think we each have our favorite singer and each person likes a different kind of music.

The Salary Jobs

I´m going to say my opinion about the salary´s job.

The salary jobs should be controlled. 

One the one hand there are many people who work hard and earn very little money. For instace, the people who work in a factory has to work long hours and they sometimes have to do overtime. They earn about 1000 euros a month.

On the other hand there are many people who have done a university degree and they earn a good salary. I think that it´s right that these people recieve a good salary because they have been studying hard for 4 or 5 years.

However there are many people who have talent such as footballers, actors or singers and who earn much money. 

I´m completely disagree with the big salary that these people receives a year because even though they have a talent, they souldn´t win so much money as in the case of Cristiano Ronaldo who earns 17 million euros a year.

In conclusion, each person has to earn an adequeate wage, so, From my point of view there should be someone who will control this imbalance of wages and to make them to be fair to all. 

Describing my friend

I´m going to introduce my best friend.
I´ve known Sarah since 12 years.
She is of a medium hight, so, she measures around 1 meter and 60 centimeters. She has long straight brown hair, big blue eyes, pointed nose, long eyelashes, thick eyebrows, some freckles and spots.
She is really fashionable, so, she loves going to the latest fashion.
From my point of view she is cheerful, charmy, reliable, so, you can trust on her, hard-working, responsible, outgoing, talkative, so , she talks with everyone and honest, she always says me the truth.
However she is a bit bossy. Three years ago we had an argument, because she ordered me to do a thing that i didn´t want. Fortunately, she apologizes me. Finally, despite this argument we have been best friends and i hope to continue being the best friends for a long time.



 Peer response for Laura Gómez Cutillas
 By: Ana Haro Hernández
 I like your topic because friendship is very important to me, but i don´t understand some parts  because of your form to explain. I think you can improve it and make this paragraph stronger.

Guernica Picture

This picture makes me feel very bad because i put myself in the situation of those people who unknowingly endured the great civil war. But especially what i feel when i see this picture is sad to think what these defenseless people have suffered. Also, i feel a huge pain especially for the women located under the bull screaming as she kneels and takes his dead son in her arms.
Overall, this picture makes me feel a lot of anguish and suffering, so, all the picture pain is entering in me and comes a time when i feel part of it.